Hey, just checkin up on you, haha. No, but for cereal. You've come far since last time I saw. Keep it up, keep learning, keep growing as an artist, and try not to lose your creativity along the way :D
I feel like at 58 seconds, it should drop a bit harder. It also sounds like some reverb carries into it, which you could just mute the channels that aren't being used in the next portion to clear up a little space in the mix. The overall mixdown needs a bit of work, which isn't a big deal though, cause this is still a W.I.P. Maybe add a bit more variation to the melody, too. But, I like it, man. Keep up the good work. :D
Thank you for the feedback!
yea man this is awesome. But i agree with Omegeist, it definitely needs a bit more tweaking and i noticed at 3:05 and 3:21 the kick sounds off and i was wondering if this was intentional? but either way this is a great song man and i cant wait to hear more from you in the future :D
I just went through and updated the kick and then attempted to re-compress it and i must of compressed too hard. I'll fix it eventually. This is actually an older song. Check out "Restrain", that's my most recent song hardstyle song. Actually have a new one in the works atm. :) Thanks for your feedback!
Honestly . . . . . this is surprisingly amusing XD
Thanks sir! Where I'm brand spanking new at this, I sometimes worry that my stuff must sound like a kid banging on tin cans compared to these amazing artists out there.
i like it. but it feels like there is something missing idk what it is though lol but overall this is really good man. keep up the good work :D
maybe i need more harmony
this is great man i love the vibe it gives off and im getting back into making hardstyle a bit so would you be interested in a collab in the future??
Sure, it might be a while but I'd love to collab. Thanks for the feedback!
if your looking to make more hardstyle i suggest synapse hydra for kicks but umm the vocals get a little repetetive and the screech feels held back the synths sound a bit too basic and you couldve done a better job with the mixing but overall for ur first or one of your first songs this is alot better than what i made when i started out so yea but im just trying too give you some pointers cause when i started i didnt have any help lol but good job
nice work man not really my style of music but you did a good job overall the only thing that bothered me was the hi hats it just seemed like they needed a bit more variation but very chill song
dude this is amazing
really the only thing i can think of that this might need is a little more eqing and the lead a bit louder but i fucking love the melody thats why i want it to be louder lol but seriously let me know when this is done cause its fucking SHWEET lol oh and by the way it wouldve been a 10 if it didnt say WIP lol
lol, thanks man. And will do. =)
first real hardstyle song ive seen on here since ephixa lol but in my opinion the kick needs to be a bit longer and maybe more bass if its a kick that you sampled out then STRECH THAT SHIT or just add some reverse bass lol but overall amazing song keep up the good work homedog
I agree, I think I need to work with the kick more. Just haven't gotten around to it. It's a lot of work. Either way, I really appreciate the feedback! thanks man! =)
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